Hmmm, a little messy and lacking some structure =/
Well the song was good, and was greatly mastered, but yes the club intro was a bit messy and was lacking some ''point'' if you know what i mean =P
So like the club intro, good of you to put it in though, experimenting is always a good thing, but the rythm was way to complex, like i got the kick-bass thing, but ontop of that there was like 3-4 different crash/ride/cowbell rythms, and ontop of that i think the transitions were really lazy, like sloppy (sorry if mispell) It sounds as if, yes, you just put the part into the song =P And i think that maybe the bass was a bit loud for that first part, very dominating.
But i quickly get over that part, and when you bring in the good old Env breakbeat thingy i like it, good idea to put the countdown in there, and in this part, EVERYTHING sounds more planned, the transitions are awesome, and the melodies/rythms clashes nicely into eachother, creating a nice overall picture, instead of just adding a rythm ontop of the other.
You carry it all nicely on, with great melodies and even greater rythms/transitions!
I would also like to add that it is maybe a bit short, i think that every song should be atleast over 03:00 minutes, especially when there is a club beat in there! =O Like, in the end you could've brought it back to that, and made much more out of it, but, newgrounds dont like strecthing things out to much, maybe that is why? atleast that is the reason i dont wanna cross 04:00 minutes in most of my newer songs =P
Great synth sounds, incredibly phat and nice sounding, together with the bass (after the club intro) they form a NICE song!
Current Score
4.64 / 5.00 (+ 0.0065)
8/10
4/5
Nice song, finally a new full song by you! Nice work exept for maybe that the club intro was a bit ''thrown in there'', and sounds very sloppy and lacked a sense of point.
Thank you for your time.
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