hmmmmmmmmmm
This just sounded REALLY boring and dull, it didnt catch me in any way =/
the drumbeat was just...there, didnt add ANYTHING to the song really =P
a good idea is to like have more than drum + bass + melody going on at the same time, adding some really cool transissions and breaks is a really good idea to improve your songs ^_^
i gave you three for trying? =]
nice
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