disregarding its top five spot, as noeone else is!
yea ok first off, this song is very dull and very straight forward...The thing is that it needs:
1. A harder kick
2. it needs bass?
3. it needs a more interesting or at all a HH-line
4. it needs mastering
5. it needs proper construction cause the intro together with the transissions crossing that synth playing over and over is just not enough for me man =/ and it shouldnt be for top five, i am sorry, really no offense to you as an artist!
just work some and try listening to different types of songs, this may sound like Daft Punk wannabe =P
well, and a change of layer note is also VERY important, or else it gets dry, dull, and incredibly boring!
but do keep going and when you make another song, feel free to PM me about it ;-)
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