Ethalyn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shake Ya Apple Booty]

Your definate best, original and newcreating ;]

Great job on this! -b

I love the intro, its so wacky and awesome at the same time... beat boxing and the funny beep in the back makes it an intro that makes me wanna listen more ;)

You go on a little by little adding more and more sounds, which then again makes me just wanna hear MORE and MORE!!! I simply love this!

Great work on the chord progressions, the awe inspiring touch of the synth (i think the hard synth sound contributes to make this feel), and the GREAT depth and dynamic quality of this song, really impresses me, great work ;)

The structure is also perfect, which is something that you have clearly gotten better on the last couple of months :)

10/10
5/5

Great work, i favd and dld ;)

Thank you for your time.

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TheVeniceBeachriders responds:

Thank you very much! :D
Thanks for score and review!

TVB / RAL

[<DjT> EoY]

Hell, nice song dude!

Wow i liked this, dramatic!

Nice intro, you had a really nice dramatic piano/pad thing going on. The choirs in the back really bring the intro together and makes me want to hear more... a proffesional intro is the right word ;) After this you kind of change the entire mood, which is a thing i also tend to do, i liked what you brought in there, it had a nice inspiring feel to it!

The chorus, ehm... in my opinion the beat seems to be a little too weak to support the strong feeling your going for here. The crashes are very huge and hidden away (the crash sample sound itself is a very large sound, but the mastering/volume addjustment made it dissapear.) The kick is drowning, this is a thing i see alot of people doing lately, and i really dont like it when such great ideas end up half as good as their potential because the kick is weak... a tip atleast from me would be to find a new layer for your kick, and to compress it too give it that extra "thump"! This may ofcourse just be my own personal opinon ;]

Nice structure, you swithed it upalot which is a thing i like, you kept me interested all through, nice job ;)))

810
4/5

A truly nice idea, and overall a great mix. Only thing i would want is a stronger kick that gave the track a powerboost!

Thank you for your time.

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*Gz on top 5, i really hope this review helped!*

DjTrancite responds:

Alright Let's Start Backwards :D

Review Helped.
Much Worthy Time :D
I Like Kick...
Very Nice Idea, Yes :D
Like 4's
Like 8's
Very Interesting And Switchy.
Like You Opinion, But I'm Not Sure.
I Like Drowning.. Hehe Wait No I Don't xD
Intro Was From YellTek :P
Dramatic Is Good.

All In All, I Get A Good...
And You Get A Good Review :D

Thanks For My Time..? Wait.. Thanks For Your Time :D

<DjT>

[Love will be shown.]

Nice going m8! ^_^

Sweet song man, i like it alot!

Cool beat, very R&B... this song should go under pop or R&B btw! I like the reverse sounds and the depth of the beat, it has alot of nice features, ALOT of different sounds for one beat!

I enjoyed your harmonic/peacefull leads/sounds for your melodies, pan flute, and all the pads fit!

Its a nice mix, theres really nothing more to say... im sorry for the short review!

10/10
5/5

:]

Thank you for your time.

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Helth responds:

short review?? its pretty long =D..
thanks man!
I'll submit a final soon

Helth

[One Last Hope - Kriz Remix]

Great :]

Really great song, Kr1z style ;)))

Love the intro, the pads are very harmonic. Nice flow on them, and the chords are nice ;) (F777 is a epic trance genius!), I love your kick, it has alot of power and depth, nice job on both the layering and the mastering :)

I like your Rob Mayth styled bridge before the chorus, it charges the song very nicely, and the thin kind of high pitched snare in the back helps alot! nice vocal, i think maybe the slicing could be a LITTLE more tight, because i can hear its out of rythm by just a little bit ;)

The transitions and bridges are really pure. This song is tight, which i LOVE. It has a simplicity that is nice to find in Hands Up, so many people out there tend to just throw sounds in there and make the whole thing a clutter of sounds, you made the mastering crisp and clear, and the song is very dynamic ;)

Nice structure also, you bring both aggresive and harmonic touches to a very detailed mix, great job, i love it!

10/10
5/5

Sweet remix man, respect ;]

Thank you for your time.

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*Im releasing a new song today btw! Hardstyle/HandsUp/DutchTrance/Hardcor e/ambient! Check it out later on ;)))*

Kr1z responds:

Intro pads - Thank you! I love the chords, gj F-777 ;-)
Kick - Yeh working alot on kicks lately :D Going more harddance/ hands up 'ish.
Rob Mayth - the bridge teaser thingy could be better but hey its a start.. glad you already liked it!
Slicing - I'm new to slicing so you're probably right!
Transitions - I worked quite hard on them. Thanks!!
Master - Yeh im mixing & mastering my songs quite decently lately :D Thanks!
Structure - Yesh! Glad you liked it :D

Thanks for the wicked review!
I checked your song too =D

Cheers,

Kr1z.

[(WF1) The Lotus petal WIP.]

Sweet man :-]

Nice man, harmonic!

I like all the sounds really, it gives me the clear feeling of summer! This could actually be a theme for a serious Hollywood movie by my first impression (its a demo), or it could slide right into the roll as a theme for the new Zelda game :] (apart from the other MAIN MAIN theme lawl.)

Nice work on the pads, the chord progression is nice (the tiny portion i got through listening to a demo), i really like the dramatic touch to the notes. There really is a clear feel of greatness in this ;)))

Nice to have some percussion in the backgrounds, some when they make ambient (i know this is classical, but some actually do this when making classical to), feel the immediate emotion either to have NO drums (which sucks) or to, for whatever reason, mix in INDUSTRIAL drums!?!?!? You mixed in nice tambourines and some nice toms to bring the song (demo) some depth.

10/10
5/5

I really want too hear the full, because my immediate impression of the demo is that this is a great song, worthy of some attention ;))) (I think this is the first song i heard by you, i though your career was reviewing LOL! XD).

Thank you for your time.

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wyldfyre1 responds:

Hah, i'm pretty sure you've reviewed some of my other songs bro. Either way, nahh i've been writing music for almost 2 years now (give or take). Feel free to listen to some of my work who knows it may jog your memory that you've reviewed me haha. Anyway, yeah i plan on adding more percussion to this for sure and it DOES have a ambient feel to it wich i wanted it to have even though i'm labeling this under Classical (basicly because of all the strings and the percs). Thanks for the review buddy!

[Strollin` Down The Street]

Great!

But the snare IS a little loud!

Turn down the snare and you have a SERIOUSLY tight beat! Great work on the nice flow in the bass, and the drums are great. Beat just keeps "strollin" by ;)))

10/10
5/5

Funky!

Thank you for your time.

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DjRocALot responds:

yeah, it aint the best one, but then again not the worst that ive made! Im gonna change it and post it again! :)
Thanks for review and score!

Roc A Lot / The Venice Beachriders

[Military Graveyard]

Nice!

I really like this, could lead up to a great rap song! Reminds me of some sad Eminem song. With some more background action (wind, sea, water, anything.) this would sound SUHWEET... i love the progression on the pads and the piano is fantastic! Great drum rolls ;) TASTY!

10/10
5/5

:)

Thank you for your time.

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DjRocALot responds:

thanks a lot for review and score dude! :D

Roc A Lot / The Venice Beachriders

[American Football]

Nice!

God i imagine guys like teh rock comin out on the field dude ;) Badass tune,keep em comin! Sweet synth, its hard hitting, fitting for the really simple but yet powerfull melody ;)))

10/10
5/5

Sweet!

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DjRocALot responds:

yeah, I was picturing the majestic feeling when the team comes on to the field! :)
Thanks for review and score!

Roc A Lot / The Venice Beachriders

[Industrial Graveyard]

Awesome!

Real psyc stuff here, this is something very fitting for a really MESSED up game/movie!!! The great little sounds in the back and the really heavy chord progression on the piano!

Really awesome :) Nice job on this one ;)

10/10
5/5

Sweetcawk! XD

Thank you for your time.

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DjRocALot responds:

Yeah dude! I was picturing someone looking over the wast industrial robot graveyard in the darkness, and the main big boss is prepared for battle! :D
Thanks for review and score!

Dj Roc A Lot / The Venice Beachriders

[DXM - Yellow Dot]

Im calm now ^_______________^

Thats my calm face ;)

God this was great, you have a point though (thats right, im talking to Chuck Norris on MSN), the drums could need some better amstering, to sound "louder" as to say and need to pop out just a tad bit more...

All the pads/FXs are fucking ace, nothin' but ace in this! God its awesome!

Sweet job on the flow (structure and dynamics), you really are imo a great artist now!

10/10
5/5

Sweetcock! (Oh its happening!)

Thank you for your time.

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tijnn responds:

Hahaha x] Thanks for the kind review, my intention sure was to calm people down, but that's what's ambient is for, in my opinion.

I'm glad you liked it! Chuck Norris.

Oh yeah, and eh.
Sweetcock ._.'

-DXM