Its very dry, and a tad bit to "lacking"...
The intro is good, but you went with a rather short club intro, which should build faster, and me more energetic!
See, if you go for 32 beats in your intro, you could start like you did in the very beginning. But if you go for 8, or 16, i wont bother to count what you did, im pretty sure you went with 8 (this is according to the FL piano roll people). You should really make it more energetic, because this intro was very dry and lacking in energy.
Add some sidechained layers in the back, some "loops" (sliced OFCOURSE), or some applaud etc etc. Nice hard bass part, that part is actually very decent, your bass is really nice for 3xosc... all i would say tighten up the transitions, and add energy to the bridge from quiet to hard part of the intro ;)
8/10
4/5
Can be really cool, just a little lacking.
Thank you for your time.
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