Ethalyn's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Electro (Demo)]

cool

This was pretty cool, but not that much work put into this, you just kinda played the guitar and added some effects, but it is a demo and i definatly like your idea^^ keep it up and tell me when full version comes out:)

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Southern-Weather responds:

Yeah man, like I said, I got really bored. I'm definitely going to add more stuff later, and I'll let you know when I finish it.

[Rose At Nightfall]

really good!

haha i feel like im in a boss fight in some n64 game, it does also remind a bit of supersmash bros, awesome job m8:) keep it up^^

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NemesisTheory responds:

Awesome! :D
As long as there's a boss around when you picture this music I'm totally happy XD

Thank you for the review! And I'll try :D

[Pokemon Sinnoh Pokerap (FULL)]

ok, ill wright a real one....

Ok first off, your rapping is a thing that anything can do, and you rap in anything BUT the rythm of the song, when people listen to this song, im sorry but i just cant see the people who thinks ''wow this guy is the new eminem!'' i just wondered how this made the best track EVER on NG, because it is not really that good, dont take this the wrong way, im just trying to say that this is not all that good, a tip is to not TRY to scream when you rap, it sounds like your trying to play ''ghetto'' while you rap the pokerap, now i thought pokemon was pretty cool when it was new, but this song is not something that brings back good memories, this is something MAYBE a 2 year old would sing along to (if he could talk that is)

please NG, take this away from best ever, it is not all that good, listen to ''long way home'' or ''heaven rd2'' and ''heaven rd. 3'' cause THOSE are the ones that belong here!

a little extra tip is rythm, follow the rythm when you rap, that helps:)

i hope this helps you more than my other, blind rage. sorry...

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sonicmega responds:

Much better :)

Well, to begin, please understand that I don't tell people to write reviews for my songs, I just respond to them. How people choose to react to what I produce is their choice and their choice only, and I shall act accordingly.

As for the "ghetto" addition, I apologize if it didn't work the way I intended, but it sounded flat just simply saying the names, so I wanted to add some gruffness to it.

The 2 year old comment is unnecessary. Don't do that. Same with asking NG to remove a submission or plugging other songs in your review. All bad ideas.

Lastly, I agree that I could have made a little more effort to follow the rhythm, but with all due respect there were some sections where keeping the names pronounced right was also just as difficult. Still, duly noted.

All that said, I still don't see how your review matches that of a 0 score, but I will accept it anyway. Just consider that what the author receives for his submission (in terms of reviews) is, to my knowledge, not a result of his telling people what to say.

[Entrance Me (Original Mix)]

cool:)

liked the opening, i really loved it, when you added some melody along with the rain it knew this was going to be great:) nice move^^

very nice song, and gz on making it to the best of the week:)

(btw i have a new preview out now + some recently added songs, maybe you can come check em out?:) )

again, really great song, enjoyed it very much:D

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Mrmilkcarton responds:

Just might have to check you out. Thanks for the review.

[Paradise on E (Karco Remix)]

very nice:) respect^^

first of, gz on making it to the best of the week:) this is really great stuff! i cant really point out anything wrong with this, also checked out some of your other work and i have to say. im impressed! you have some nice skills:)

(btw i have a new preview out now + some recently added songs, maybe you can come and check them out if you want to:) )

again, very nice song, enjoyed it very much^^

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Karco responds:

Thanks. :D

I can't review everyone who asks me to review them, especially now that this is on Weekly 3rd, but I CAN comment on your page once I listen to your preview... which will be later today. ;)

Thanks for the review!

[Ultima Zone (Re-Up)]

cool:)

very cool song, liked the opening (is that the effect ''warp'' :P) but here it fits in with everything very nice. great song:) keep it up^^

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Phantasmagoria13 responds:

I believe its the effect acidrush (I think is what its called) but hey, you obviously know the ins and outs of FL ten times better than I do, ha ha. Glad this one fits in with the song though. thanks for the review!

[Maelstrom!]

cool tunes:)

Love the tune, but i guess you made this one before you learned about mastering, i just learned it and it really does wonders! but as said the tunes are very cool, but maybe dl some new vst plugins for your drums? i really like your music:) keep it up^^

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Phantasmagoria13 responds:

you are right, I did make this before I learned about mastering...and to tell the truth I still dont know what mastering is or how to do it, lol. If you have some free time, maybe send me a PM explaining what it is and how to do it? that would help me a lot Im sure because most of the criticism I get has to do with how poorly mastered my songs are ha ha. thanks for the review!

[Ultima Legion]

presampled flyby:P

man that presampled flyby was not a smart move, everyone who uses NG to submit their stuff uses FL:P + i am very tired of it since i used it myself like 115k times! but other than that i love the tune and the drums were really nicely done:) i enjoyed the fast melody that came in at 1:10, nice one:)

(btw i have a new preview out now + some recently added song, maybe you could go and check em out:) )

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Phantasmagoria13 responds:

I'll be sure to keep that in mind next time I make a song, ha ha. No presamples. Good advice though, and I'd have to say I worked the hardest on the drums and the fast melody you are talking about so thanks for noticing! that melody alone probably took me half an hour to do. Great review!

[Theme from "Meanwhile..."]

awesome!:D

really original and cool stuff:) awesome work:D

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frinkzone40 responds:

glad you enjoyed it! Album "Meanwhile in Another Part of the Kitchen" will be available for download exclusively off Newgrounds Audio! (in parts, of course)

[Acid Line]

love the notes, respect

really kinda dark notes, and cool bassline in the back. can you please tell me what bass you use (from what vst plugin) awesome loop:)

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Terror-Proof responds:

I used a Wasp Basslowsaw.