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Impressive!

I really liked this, you played alot around with alot of GREAT FXs and sounds for your melodies... this is awesome man! =]

The only thing i didnt quite like about it, is that its a bit messy in the structure! Now if this was some kind of a video game song i would understand, but its dance. And dance songs should have proper structure ;) With an intro, verse, chorus and an outro... the pattern should be easy to follow because you are supposed to dance to it! :)

I love the FXs though, you did a great job on the transitions and bridges for sure!

Just IMO atleast, i think you should maybe work just a tad bit more on structurizing your songs to sound more "pro" =P

9/10
5/5

I hope this review helped man!

Thank you for your time.

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Nice one dude =]

Wow, opening is really, well pretty might not be an appropriate word for a song, but dang its damn hot o_O I love the pad, and the piano is really nice! Both the sound AND the melody :) Although, some of the notes are like TOTALLY off :S 00:45 and 00:55 being examples!

I really liked it, its very well composed :)

10/10
5/5

Awesome work m8 ^_^

Thank you for your time.

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cRAVE01 responds:

^__^

Thanks. I am glad you liked the opening. And yeah, those flat notes are a little irk-some. I need to go back and play with the whole tune to see if I can iron that out . . .

But I am glad you enjoyed it! and thanks for the review bro.

Oh my god, this is music!

GREAT remix you have here man, i love what you did!

The beat is perfect, its just where it is supposed to be. I love the sounds you chose for it, they fit so nicely in with the R&B remix feel of the entire song, i think they are one of the main reasons this song falls so easily into my liking, its perfect in every way!

IMO the stutter/glitch feel in the entire thing is great, the intro stuttering made the rest of the song seem so full and wideopen. It really contributed making this song properly building and rising, as any 10/10 should!

Great work on the structure as said, the intro is stuttering just a little bit (atleast it feels like it), and then you keep carrying it out, keeping it interesting through the entire song. Adding more and more great effects and instruments.

I think the way you kept it so monotone through the whole thing, but still made it rise and fall so well really made this track. Well done!

You mixed everything amazingly well in, and you just made my fav list man! Your talented! I will check out some other songs ;)

10/10
5/5

Awesome work indeed, i love it :)

Thank you for your time.

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takeflight responds:

I can't believe i never responded to this til now, wow lol. Anyway, thank you very much for this very extensive and helpful review, god knows the audio portal could use more people like you! Sorry for the late response, and thanks again!

Nice =]

Best song on Newgrounds, period :) Its beautifull!

10/10
5/5

Thank you for your time.

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Haha schweet

Lol love the guitar! Adorable little remake of a classic! x) Well, sorry if this review didnt really help, i just wanted to say i liked it, im not really that IN to video game music enough to analyze i properly =P

10/10
5/5

:)

Thank you for your time.

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Dramatic :)

Probably one of the more dramatic works from you. The piano note progression/the chords are very fitting with all the sound, only complaint i MIGHT have is that the kick is pulling the entire song with it, makes it feel like your vacuuming my ears o_O

Other than that, awesome work! I like the beat, and as said the piano is among the most dramatic and also among the best you ever made =]

10/10
5/5

Great work! -b

Thank you for your time.

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DjRocALot responds:

Yeah, the vacum thing is a little annoyin...Staring hard on the screen* SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP! Sucked into the screen :P haha...
Thanks for review and scores!! XD

Dj Roc A Lot / The Venice Beachriders

Well, its cool :)

Its a really cool idea, and you definatly stick out from all the other remixes i heard! You didnt go for the classic Penta P/B0UNC3 rip off, i like that! ( I know Penta P has the original btw, well Scooter does to, idk, im really not sure.)

Its great, as said. The only thing i really object is the strength of the kick, and the dynamics and structure of the song.

The mastering seems to somewhat drown the bass, and i do believe that the beat itself, together with all the sound could use some tightening! The main synth lead sound (wtf word) may be a bit to weak and loose for my liking, and i think this is something that wouldnt really "catch" me if you know what i mean? Not to be an ass or ANYTHING like that, its just my honest/personal opinion on the song :)

Maybe just work a tad bit on structure and dynamics (keeping all the sounds together to form a nice, pro sounding song!)

But its a fun idea, and indeed it was a fun listen ^_^

8/10
4/5

Great work! Just maybe pay attention to some of the tips i gave earlier :) I hope this review was to some help ^_^

Thank you for your time.

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Haha awesome! x)

Lol i love this, fast paced and just lots of crazy melodies and stuff! FXs are all over the place and all the vocals are cool =D

Not much more than that to say, its awesome!

10/10
5/5

Great work ^_^

Thank you for your time.

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Wow, beautifull!

The intro was really amazing! But yeah, the drums MAY have been a tad bit to weak, but you know, so i wont give less score on that lol x) Really nice beat though ;) Just pump up dat valjum! (lol i love jamaicans)

10/10
5/5

Awesome work dude!

Thank you for your time.

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tijnn responds:

Hehehe i completely agree with you now that i've heard them on speakers, bah, my earphones didn't really bring that out, but i'll change that asap.

Awesome man :)))

Dude this beat is the tighest and most catchiest piece you have done yet! Its really great ;)))

Love the old school feel mixed in with the sorta modern timbo hiphop beat touch. Great run through the whole thing, never got boring!

This with vocals will be a hit indeed :)))

10/10
5/5 (lol i saw some jerk voted 0.00, lol)

Awesome man!!! =DDD

Thank you for your time.

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TheVeniceBeachriders responds:

Yeah dude, first vote of the day and it was a zero bomb! lol!
thanks a lot for the scores and review! :D

The Venice Beachriders

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